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Gandhi is an influential Indian civil rights leader. To strive for Indians rights, he launched Non-cooperation movement and asked Indians wove cloth by themselves to resist Britain colonial ruling. In spite of suffering from imprison ,Gandhi never gave up and still persisted his ideal .Finally,he leaded India towards independence .Nowadays, Indians made a statue to memorize Gandhi –the greatest spiritual leader in their mind.
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