The little girl got a bad cold and she was put on a drip in the hospital. She felt very sad. Suddenly, she heard the melody from the aisle and gradually approached next to her. The handsome violinist play the violin in front of her. The music soothed the pain and bad emotion.
After a week, the little girl recovered. Sometimes, she played jump-rope or play ball in the backyard at her home. She usually think of the violinist who made music and accompanied With her to get through the tough time.
麻煩老師幫我改一下這一篇作文，有些轉折的地方希望老師能給我一點建議可以替換甚麼字或片語，寫一寫真的有點詞窮~麻煩了！謝謝
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