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幫我看一下這篇哪裡有問題,那如有問題該怎麼改 (105學測作文)
(一段) As an old saying puts it"teamwork just is power."But there
are among us many who don't think so because many people always consider he is able to cope with own things .If we put
the problem on family matters,a few examples will show you
how bad the problem has become. Firstly,we can let things no
efficiency.Secondly,we can make problems become complicate.
(二段) What,then,should we do to deal with such a situation
?In my view, we should take the following measures.To begin
with , we do family matters have to elect a leadership. On top
of that,everyone should mutual help.If we can do as such,l am
sure that all will fastly end.
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