可以幫我修正我的中翻英嗎?並且說明我翻的哪裡有錯,不管事時態還是用法,越詳細越好,非常感謝.
1.在我拍攝過的所有照片當中,我即將描寫的這一張特定的相片,絕對是最值得珍惜的2.這是一張一個女孩和我的照片,幾年前在台中火車站拍照的3.故事是這樣的,有一天,我一路上邊哭邊跑向車站路口,因為稍早前我為了一件小事與我媽大吵一架.4.就在我即將進入車站時,這女孩向我靠近,靦腆地問道:姊姊,你可以好心買一些口香糖嗎?
5.就在當下,我才恍然大悟,我是如此幸運且驕縱的女孩6.我毫不猶豫地向她買口香糖,並要求與她合照7.至於為何我認為這張照片是最珍貴的,我可以就下列幾個方面說明.
1.Among all the picture I have ever taken ,the one I am going to describe is definitely the most precious.
2.A girl and me are in this picture,which was taken years ago in Taichung Train Station.
3.It started with one day I ran to the station entrance with tears rolling down the face after I had a quarrel with my mother for trivial.
4.It was when I entering the station that the girl approached me and shyly said;Could you buy som chewing gum with your kindness?
5.At that right moment ,It dawned on me that how fortunate and spoilt I was.
6.Without hesitation , I bought a few and required to take a picture with her.
7.As for why I thought this picture is the most precious,I will take the following views for explaination.
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